How to ensure your newsletter is *not* read

White space focuses attention on your content
Have you ever pitched aside a newsletter because its text was too dense? I have. I do it all the time.
I’m not alone.
It’s a shame, really, because the stories in those newsletters may be packed with good information. I’ll never know because their editors committed a critical mistake. In their efforts to save space, and in turn, money, they overlooked the importance of white space.
White space – the blank area around blocks of text or other design elements – gives context or meaning to the words it surrounds. It helps focus your attention.
When Writing, Less is More
Incorporating white space is a tactic used all the time by high-end retailers. Think of an upscale brand – Tiffany & Co., Hermès, Jimmy Choo. Their shelves are uncluttered. Peaceful. Each shelf displays a single item, transforming it from a potential purchase into a work of art. Much like a gallery, the eye has place to rest and take in the unique nature character of each piece on display.
Translate that experience into writing. If constructed correctly, each story in your newsletter should be a gem: informative, actionable. But if that information is crammed into a too-small space, no one will notice it. Unless they have a clear reason for wanting to dig for the good stuff, people will leave. Your newsletter just became the written version of TJ Maxx.
I’ll be blunt: this is going to mean more work. Writing concisely is always more difficult than writing at length because the words you retain must be more descriptive. There’s no room for imprecision. You have to make hard choices.
But as Keith Robertson points out in his essay “On White Space”:
“The image of what you present is more important than the paper you could be saving.”
And when it can spell the difference between your newsletter being read or pitched, making room for white space is a smart investment indeed.









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